tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post1592316099795323293..comments2023-05-17T07:13:14.099-04:00Comments on Sweet Water Blue Sky: Sleeping BeautyMelissa Campbellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16024400805290277282noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-67654928753638296142010-11-10T23:49:51.744-05:002010-11-10T23:49:51.744-05:00great word flow. felt sensual and languid. nice jo...great word flow. felt sensual and languid. nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-38532614317498738472010-11-10T01:51:24.083-05:002010-11-10T01:51:24.083-05:00It was great to revisit this again... through the ...It was great to revisit this again... through the Poetry potluck... <br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-19416509291763625042010-11-09T19:42:41.394-05:002010-11-09T19:42:41.394-05:00Dear girl friend,
what a cute piece you are sharin...Dear girl friend,<br />what a cute piece you are sharing here.<br /><br />you speak of hard truth here,<br />love the wit and talent in it.<br />Thanks for linking with Jingle Poetry.<br />love your poetry,<br />love your supportive matter more.<br />xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-64416941843940416812010-11-06T23:37:02.250-04:002010-11-06T23:37:02.250-04:00Lots of emotion in those words. Thanks for sharin...Lots of emotion in those words. Thanks for sharing!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-50436516506775044332010-11-05T20:29:50.520-04:002010-11-05T20:29:50.520-04:00Beautiful poem - but it reminds me that I am very ...Beautiful poem - but it reminds me that I am very angry at EVE. But then I realize that Jesus came and made a way for me! Now I am happy again! (smile)Hazel Moonhttp://www.hazel-moon-blog.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-79117369058856137082010-11-03T22:09:04.844-04:002010-11-03T22:09:04.844-04:00Princess Melissa we serve a great master who break...Princess Melissa we serve a great master who breaks the spell and takes away the poison of that one bite.<br /><br />I write devos for children the picture you portray would be a magnificent story for children and adults alike<br /><br />you can always contact me at moondustwriter@gmail.com for input<br /><br />hugs and thanks for the beautymoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-73412369781332284442010-11-03T18:35:57.217-04:002010-11-03T18:35:57.217-04:00Thank you for all your feedback! I appreciate your...Thank you for all your feedback! I appreciate your taking the time to visit here and share your own work. Blessings to all. :)Melissa Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16024400805290277282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-38606153812518424962010-11-03T17:52:35.484-04:002010-11-03T17:52:35.484-04:00i echo everyones sentiments about the queen stanza...i echo everyones sentiments about the queen stanza...very good read...enjoyed this and thanks for sharing with one shot...peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-6914101769566847382010-11-03T15:34:35.158-04:002010-11-03T15:34:35.158-04:00Very nice. I especially liked the stanza that bega...Very nice. I especially liked the stanza that began "I can be queen..." and ended with "...and all according to me." Ah, the hubris of the human heart.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-66438839676412766802010-11-03T14:27:29.803-04:002010-11-03T14:27:29.803-04:00this is really well written and my fav stanza is t...this is really well written and my fav stanza is that with the queen - choose my own destiny..lead my own symphony..this is powerfulClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-23966083260115432612010-11-03T13:49:02.461-04:002010-11-03T13:49:02.461-04:00He died my death and lived... very nice flow and I...He died my death and lived... very nice flow and I enjoyed it...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay <br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-67353195989376762292010-11-03T12:50:45.264-04:002010-11-03T12:50:45.264-04:00Beautiful I enjoyed this. The last verse is stunni...Beautiful I enjoyed this. The last verse is stunning!SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-58193830098868352692010-11-03T12:41:31.677-04:002010-11-03T12:41:31.677-04:00I enjoyed the self dialogue..and the poem builds u...I enjoyed the self dialogue..and the poem builds up very well, felt every word QUEEN..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-45806090516964943592010-11-03T11:30:31.592-04:002010-11-03T11:30:31.592-04:00smiles. i feel your words...the loss the hope..que...smiles. i feel your words...the loss the hope..queen indeed.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-91390252836561983392010-11-03T11:25:10.737-04:002010-11-03T11:25:10.737-04:00Melissa, when I entered your blog I felt as though...Melissa, when I entered your blog I felt as though I had come into a sacred space. Thank you for being here. I lived in Scranton a couple of times. Love PA. Thanks for commenting on my poem.<br />VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-74052955151925573372010-11-03T10:04:37.945-04:002010-11-03T10:04:37.945-04:00I read this aloud -- and the sounds of the words s...I read this aloud -- and the sounds of the words shape what Eve is thinking, what she does, and then her understanding of the loss (and the hope). Beautiful poem, Melissa.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-25078470402466502722010-11-03T00:46:09.872-04:002010-11-03T00:46:09.872-04:00This poem is wonderful! Found you on one stop poet...This poem is wonderful! Found you on one stop poetry! Very nice!Adam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-32694938486798280412010-11-03T00:22:14.241-04:002010-11-03T00:22:14.241-04:00wow! what a beautiful poem. love the rhythm. Flow...wow! what a beautiful poem. love the rhythm. Flows gently and clearly. simply...beautiful!<br /><br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-705168969191250461.post-80350724982272322082010-11-02T23:46:06.506-04:002010-11-02T23:46:06.506-04:00Your poem has a bold flair and I really enjoyed th...Your poem has a bold flair and I really enjoyed the way you wrote the poisonous effect of knowledge part.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com